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Thursday, 24 October 2019

Team Sports - Persuasive Writing - English

 Team sports are better than individual sports.

Which side I am in: For - Against -  Both 

Plan

- Team sports are more fun 
- It makes the game more competitive
- It tests your ability to work as a group
-Make friends and support each other
-Train with other people 

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We can all agree that sports are much better if you're playing it with other people. The games that you play as a team like basketball is more fun. Also playing as a team makes the game more competitive and it tests your ability to work as a group.

Team sports like basketball, soccer, volleyball and many more is fun to watch or play. Unlike golf or tennis, watching the game is just so bland and boring. While many may disagree with me on that one, team sports are just leagues better. Watching the athletes work together, trying to beat the other team is just so exhilarating. Watching the players performing tricks in the court or them catching a ball from a yard away is just fun to watch.

The other point that makes team sports better than individual sports is that as a team there are many people playing. Watching them play and work together so well just shows us that they trained very hard to play that well. That's not to say that individual sports athletes don't work hard but as a team, it definitely makes the sport harder to execute. Making the sport more competitive is more entertaining to watch than to see two dudes or girls try and get the ball in a hole with a stick.

Sports are much better played with friends. It makes the game less of a competition and see it as a fun game to play.  

2 comments:

  1. Hi Nino, your argument is really persuasive and you present many great points. I like how you added in examples such as watching basketball vs watching golf, which strengthened your argument. Next time you could talk a little about the other side of the argument and then provide more evidence to debunk it. Great job.

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  2. Hi Nino, I like some of the adjectives you've included in this piece :) You've shown a good understanding around this topic. Next time, you could maybe provide more evidence to support your statement.

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