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Thursday 5 September 2019

Natural Environmental (Plants and Animals) (Persuasive Writing) (National Parks)

National Parks are taking up valuable real estate and should be cleared for development.

Which side I'm in: For/Against

For
- Growing population.
- The business makes more money.

Against
- It should stay cause it's as valuable as real estate.
- All those hard work of keeping national parks good is destroyed.
-  It's very important that we have plants for our environment.

Organizing Ideas
- Growing population. / It should stay cause it's as valuable as real estate.
-  All those hard work of keeping national parks good is destroyed.
-  The business makes more money. / It's very important that we have plants for our environment.

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National Parks should not be cleared out just to make space for real estate. Clearing these parks out could further ruin our environment. We shouldn't destroy them because they are just as valuable as real estates. Also, there were people who have been before born some of us that have been cultivating these lands, all there hard work will be all for nothing if we destroy these parks. Plants are also an important part of our environment, we need them now more than ever and if we were to cut down more who knows what will happen.

We can't deny the fact that we need more space to build more buildings because of our growing population, but we also can't deny the fact that nature is also very important to us. We need nature as a whole, without trees, we would not have oxygen to breathe in, without animals we would not have food to eat. The environment is just as valuable to us, as buildings and pieces of equipment are. Taking down national parks would ruin our environment even more. 

(Second Body Paragraph.) (W.I.P)

Business who are part of real estate companies would probably agree to the idea. There is no denying that money means a lot at this point in time. Without them, we would not be able to live properly. Plants play a very huge rule in keeping our planet clean.


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